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Old 10-29-2004, 04:57 AM   #8
Mystic Rythm
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Join Date: Oct 2004
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Originally Posted by Undertoad
If you are to examine beauty, it's better to choose a form that expresses it, unless you're an expert. Using a poetic metaphor and poetic wrinting, in a big blob of text, is like chainsaw sculpture - you're making a subtle metaphor with a hammer.
THIS WORLDS A BIG POEM SCATTERED ALL ABOUT YOU AND THUS THERE IS NOT A SINGLE THING I CAN LET GO UNOBSERVED WITHOUT A BEAT OF RYTHM!
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