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I admire you for being so persistent, but you REALLY need someone to edit your work before you post it or submit it anywhere. There are tons of mispellings, incorrect grammar, and most of your sentences don't contain subjects and/or verbs. I am a former editor, and trust me, you need to work on your grammar and spelling before anyone will take your writing seriously. I'm not trying to be mean--I'm just being honest. Sorry!
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