Sun_Sparkz: Thanks for the critique. I'll have to read over it again. And as to the last paragraph of your comments, I noticed the same thing. I don't know the whys, and I don't suppose there's really a point in trying to find out. *shrug*
Sycamore: Is that the best you can do? Take your ball and go home. The olive branch wasn't extended to you. You're hopeless as far as friendship material is concerned. I see no reason to be pleasant to you, because you're simply an unpleasant person. I'm looking for someone with a more open mind and a more extended vocabulary.
MrNoodle: Yup, it's the first post...
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