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Originally Posted by shina
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Originally Posted by monster
I prefer the original, althought it's not as formulaic. But I agree with Flint. Making unsolicited suggestions for "improvement" on spontaneous poetry is bad form/manners. IMO of course.
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Well said. Seems criticism can only be given not received on his end of the spectrum.
Tables turned.
Alone in the dark.
What have you done.
Created your own destiny.
Alone. |
I'm curious, shina. Your sentence is ambiguous. What are you trying to say?