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Originally Posted by DanaC
Interesting. There are bits of it that don't quite scan. I can't put my finger on why in many cases, but one that stands out to me is the use of the definate article with fantasy.
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Be careful accepting proofreading advice from someone who mis-spells "definite"...
Luv ya really Dana 
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Shut up and hug. MoreThanPretty, Nov 5, 2008.
Just because I'm nominally polite, does not make me a pussy. Sundae Girl.
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