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Old 04-18-2009, 10:30 AM   #7
Pico and ME
Are you knock-kneed?
 
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I am not well versed in poetry, so please pardon me right off, but I like how this poem started to have a more constructed feel toward the end as if to reinforce how your musings became more pointed about the matter and less a stream of consciousness.
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