[jennofay]

Actually, I've been posting here and elsewhere online for many years.

good for you, you want a fucking cookie? does this make you better, holier, or more intelligent than the rest of us? i think not.

Your writing reflects your thinking. And the first critical review it will get is right here...that is unless you look at it yourself, first.

why didnt you just say that to begin with rather than sitting here pretending to be greater than everyone else and picking apart someone else to make yourself seem more intelligent? you sat here and teared jag apart saying that his typing was horrendous and therefore he is inferior to you. ive seen worse typing...by far... all he does is switch a few letters around and spell a few words incorrectly, big deal. hes human, imperfect... but i guess these are concepts someone so high and mighty as yourself wouldnt be able to understand.

You and I *are* different in age...but we are *contemporaries*

good job. so, this being the case, why was his age such a big deal to begin with? why was the fact that he is "one-third" your age such a big deal? im 19, does this make me inferior to your greatness? age is a number. it means nothing. what is important is the individuals mental age. and i think, in this respect, you have a lot of growing up to do.

I'm not *quite* too old to be your parent, but pretty darn close...I have one daughter a year or two older , and one somewhat younger than you.

minor point, but how the hell does that work? are you also almost too old to be your daughters parent? why do you bring it up to begin with? to make your post look longer and to give yourself a chance to throw in some more carefully compiled sentences and big words to make yourself appear more intelligent and inflate your ego?

If Jonson was still alive today, he'd be something like 380. Almost *eight* times my age, and older than you by a factor greater than twenty.

how old was he when he wrote? he didnt write when he was 380. why was this brought up? your arguments, too, have holes, and are difficult to follow at times. this being an example.

Do they make sense to you? Or do you find them incomprehensible? Can you paraphrase them in a way that shows you understand them?

'and for homework, kids, do pages twenty-three through twenty-six in your textbooks, even problems only...' give me a fucking break...

...If at that point you lead them around in circles, they will conclude that you've been blowing smoke all along.

well put, m'dear...

take it to heart.

you are no better than anyone else out there, you play upon other peoples weaknesses in order to feel better about yourself. you use big words and throw in fancy quotes in order to make yourself appear learned and overly intelligent, when in fact, you are just the same as all of us. you are nothing special, and pretending like you are will only make that all the more apparent to everyone else here. just because you are unhappy, uncertain, whatever does not make you god. stop acting like it does.