Aliantha's attention avarice advances alliteration attempts by assclown - Page 3

Urbane Guerrilla · 09-05-2007, 02:10 AM

I think Spexx just said LJ gave it a real beating. You do that to egg whites, they get all white and foamy.

lumberjim · 09-05-2007, 02:21 AM

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Originally Posted by Flint

Less is more. The first sentence was powerful. The additional text only diluted it, leaving it spread thin, and ineffective.

dude. there is NO point in instructing the over-dramatic on the finer points of humor. You sit at the cool table. spexx doesn't. that is the source AND the result of his tragic persona. I agree completely with your assesment of his failing, ....but if you'll notice...he assumes you are criticizing to hurt him instead of help. he's doomed to a life of envy and resentment. you're just rubbing it in.

spexx,.....what did you learn?

Aliantha · 09-05-2007, 02:23 AM

If one were to read a true streaming narrative from jimbo, wouldn't approximately every word be cock?

Edit: I meant every third word but upon reading the statement again I decided it was probably pretty close anyway.

skysidhe · 09-05-2007, 02:34 AM

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Originally Posted by Brianna

It's nice to see some literary criticism taking place here in the Cellar. Long overdue, I say.

As the guys practice one upmanship the true comedian sleeps.

Or whatever the hell your doing right now.

Cicero · 09-07-2007, 11:55 AM

Yeah- this "LJ Streaming Narrative" thing has already taken a nose-dive.

Back to the drawing board. Maybe I need to work on "LJ creative-nonfiction prose".

Or maybe I need to actually get some work done. Ummm...yeah. Work.

09-05-2007, 02:10 AM	#31
Urbane Guerrilla Person who doesn't update the user title Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Southern California Posts: 6,674	The Savage and the Allegedly Savage I think Spexx just said LJ gave it a real beating. You do that to egg whites, they get all white and foamy. __________________ Wanna stop school shootings? End Gun-Free Zones, of course.

09-05-2007, 02:23 AM	#33
Aliantha trying hard to be a better person Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Brisbane, Australia Posts: 16,493	If one were to read a true streaming narrative from jimbo, wouldn't approximately every word be cock? Edit: I meant every third word but upon reading the statement again I decided it was probably pretty close anyway. __________________ Kind words are the music of the world. F. W. Faber

09-07-2007, 11:55 AM	#35
Cicero Looking forward to open mic night. Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: New Mexico Posts: 5,148	Yeah- this "LJ Streaming Narrative" thing has already taken a nose-dive. Back to the drawing board. Maybe I need to work on "LJ creative-nonfiction prose". Or maybe I need to actually get some work done. Ummm...yeah. Work. __________________ Show me a sane man, and I will cure him for you.- Carl Jung

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