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09-04-2007, 08:02 AM | #16 |
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motivated to mock the masses.
YOINK!
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In Barrie's play and novel, the roles of fairies are brief: they are allies to the Lost Boys, the source of fairy dust and ...They are portrayed as dangerous, whimsical and extremely clever but quite hedonistic. "Shall I give you a kiss?" Peter asked and, jerking an acorn button off his coat, solemnly presented it to her. —James Barrie Wimminfolk they be tricksy. - ZenGum |
09-04-2007, 11:15 AM | #17 |
Makes some feel uncomfortable
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He uses the cyber date-rape drug. On himself. Then he brutally attacks his penis. And likes it.
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09-04-2007, 11:34 AM | #18 | |||
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This first part is really funny:
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09-04-2007, 11:44 AM | #19 |
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I was trying to meet specific criteria:
Just that first sentence wouldn't have been serious, snooty, or mushmouthed enough.
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09-04-2007, 11:46 AM | #20 |
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Less is more. The first sentence was powerful. The additional text only diluted it, leaving it spread thin, and ineffective.
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****************** There's a level of facility that everyone needs to accomplish, and from there it's a matter of deciding for yourself how important ultra-facility is to your expression. ... I found, like Joseph Campbell said, if you just follow whatever gives you a little joy or excitement or awe, then you're on the right track. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Terry Bozzio |
09-04-2007, 11:50 AM | #21 |
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It's nice to see some literary criticism taking place here in the Cellar. Long overdue, I say.
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In Barrie's play and novel, the roles of fairies are brief: they are allies to the Lost Boys, the source of fairy dust and ...They are portrayed as dangerous, whimsical and extremely clever but quite hedonistic. "Shall I give you a kiss?" Peter asked and, jerking an acorn button off his coat, solemnly presented it to her. —James Barrie Wimminfolk they be tricksy. - ZenGum |
09-04-2007, 01:24 PM | #22 |
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I think if she had separated those three comments only adding in between other people's posts it would have really worked.
An "LJ Streaming Narrative". A new and innovative writing style. Whaddaya think? I might adopt it.
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09-04-2007, 01:29 PM | #23 |
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Demonstrate?
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09-04-2007, 01:39 PM | #24 |
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Well, say I brought up possible contents of LJ's underwear drawer.
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09-04-2007, 01:43 PM | #25 |
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What is the "new and innovative writing style" ???
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09-04-2007, 01:51 PM | #26 |
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I'm getting to that Flint. I am demostrating. The new and innovative writing style is the "LJ Streaming Narrative."
Now say I brought up possible contents of LJ's underwear drawer as an example. (this is fiction folks and not intended as a jab) Again.
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09-04-2007, 01:56 PM | #27 |
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Okay, let's say you brought up the possible contents of LJ's underwear drawer. As an...example. Of...something.
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09-04-2007, 02:12 PM | #28 |
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Lj scowls and folds up the binoculars, and goes to the back bedroom and opens the drawer.
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09-04-2007, 02:16 PM | #29 |
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Flint falls asleep at his desk. He falls and hits his head on the keyboardddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd... . . . like that?
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09-04-2007, 04:17 PM | #30 |
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He digs through his latest copies of ass-masters and deposits the binoculars in his favorite hiding spot.
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