New art - Nudes - Page 2

Gromitspapa · 01-28-2006, 11:00 AM

I liked them all, case. Moonlight Bather especially for the colors, sexy curves, and light in front of her. Contemplation is my favorite for its composition, balance, and pleasing colors. I also liked Meditative for the pose and the way her hair forms a wall. It has a stained glass quality to it.

I think your work is outstanding!

kerosene · 01-31-2006, 12:58 AM

Thanks guys for all the feedback...it is good to know how everyone reacts. Definitely the staring boobies. Yeah...now that one is creeping me out a bit. But for some reason it is still one of my favorites. Thanks so much for looking at them!

kerosene · 01-31-2006, 01:01 AM

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Originally Posted by mrnoodle

I'm also a big fan of Meditative. In general (if you are still looking for feedback), I find the ones that don't feature frontal nudity to be the most interesting. Contemplative scares me a little -- the nipples are STARING at me. That might have been what you intended, of course. I was a little threatened by it, frankly. Do women have a different reaction?

I am not sure if women have that same reaction. Honestly, this is the first time I have really got any constructive criticism. It's nice to get ideas on where to improve.

Would it be hard to look at a nude of a man with an obvious erect penis?

Trilby · 01-31-2006, 08:20 AM

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Originally Posted by case

I am not sure if women have that same reaction.
Would it be hard to look at a nude of a man with an obvious erect penis?

They don't bother me. As to your second question, No. It wouldn't be hard to look at. I wouldn't put it over my sofa, or anything, but, it certainly wouldn't bother me.

Cyclefrance · 01-31-2006, 09:26 AM

Hi Case,

Your series of pictures reminded me quite a lot of the style depicted in the picture below - have you ventured into fairy illustration at all...?:

wolf · 01-31-2006, 01:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by case

I am not sure if women have that same reaction. Honestly, this is the first time I have really got any constructive criticism. It's nice to get ideas on where to improve.

Would it be hard to look at a nude of a man with an obvious erect penis?

I have a similiar reaction to the boobs staring at me. It's not so much that they are they, but how they are drawn that causes the effect, methinks. The starkness of the illustration is what does it. Oh, and the precision of the circles has something to do with it too.

A lot would depend on how the penis was depicted.

xoxoxoBruce · 01-31-2006, 05:29 PM

Naughty bits draw the eye. Sometimes too much, so they become a distraction from the whole composition.

LabRat · 02-01-2006, 09:34 AM

Maybe if the right one (her left one) were a little more shadowed like that side of her body, it wouldn't stand out so much, and therefor not draw your eyes down quite so much. My eyes went directly to the breasts, then the rest after a second or two. I love the way the color changes in the hair in all of them.

kerosene · 02-01-2006, 11:48 AM

I suppose in some ways I am looking to force the viewer to acknowledge the breasts, but I couldn't tell you why.

LabRat · 02-02-2006, 12:55 PM

Well, then you accomplished your goal, which I would think makes you even that much more of a talented artist

capnhowdy · 02-02-2006, 06:11 PM

Definately no shortage of talent here. The more I look, the more I like.

kerosene · 02-03-2006, 05:59 PM

Yet another (finished today):

Grace

monster · 02-04-2006, 05:48 PM

Moonlight Bather is my favorite. Very "art nouveau" which is a style I am interested in, whereas the others I find more cartoonish/anime which does nothing for me.

I find the cerise nipples more "cartoony" than the rest of the bodies, which makes me suspect the artist is scared of them/drawing them. It's like when shy girls wear too much make-up.

Not that I know an awful lot about any of it.

kerosene · 02-06-2006, 03:57 PM

heh, I haven't thought about that...the nipple comment. I wonder...am I afraid of nipples?

Cyclefrance · 02-07-2006, 02:54 AM

You need to go here Case

01-31-2006, 09:26 AM	#20
Cyclefrance Pump my ride! Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Deep countryside of Surrey , England Posts: 1,890	Hi Case, Your series of pictures reminded me quite a lot of the style depicted in the picture below - have you ventured into fairy illustration at all...?: Attached Images __________________ Always sufficient hills - never sufficient gears

01-31-2006, 05:29 PM	#22
xoxoxoBruce The future is unwritten Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 71,105	Naughty bits draw the eye. Sometimes too much, so they become a distraction from the whole composition. __________________ The descent of man ~ Nixon, Friedman, Reagan, Trump.

02-01-2006, 09:34 AM	#23
LabRat twatfaced two legged bumhole Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,143	Maybe if the right one (her left one) were a little more shadowed like that side of her body, it wouldn't stand out so much, and therefor not draw your eyes down quite so much. My eyes went directly to the breasts, then the rest after a second or two. I love the way the color changes in the hair in all of them. __________________ Strength does not come from how much weight you can lift, or how many miles you can run. It comes from knowing that you set a goal, and rose to the challenge. Strength comes from within.

02-02-2006, 12:55 PM	#25
LabRat twatfaced two legged bumhole Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,143	Well, then you accomplished your goal, which I would think makes you even that much more of a talented artist __________________ Strength does not come from how much weight you can lift, or how many miles you can run. It comes from knowing that you set a goal, and rose to the challenge. Strength comes from within.

02-02-2006, 06:11 PM	#26
capnhowdy Blatantly Homosapien Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 6,200	Definately no shortage of talent here. The more I look, the more I like. __________________ Please type slowly. I can't read very fast............... and no holy water, please.

01-28-2006, 11:00 AM	#16
Gromitspapa Knight of the Oval-Shaped Conference Table Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 377	I liked them all, case. Moonlight Bather especially for the colors, sexy curves, and light in front of her. Contemplation is my favorite for its composition, balance, and pleasing colors. I also liked Meditative for the pose and the way her hair forms a wall. It has a stained glass quality to it. I think your work is outstanding!

01-31-2006, 12:58 AM	#17
kerosene Touring the facilities Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: The plains of Colorado Posts: 3,476	Thanks guys for all the feedback...it is good to know how everyone reacts. Definitely the staring boobies. Yeah...now that one is creeping me out a bit. But for some reason it is still one of my favorites. Thanks so much for looking at them!

02-01-2006, 11:48 AM	#24
kerosene Touring the facilities Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: The plains of Colorado Posts: 3,476	I suppose in some ways I am looking to force the viewer to acknowledge the breasts, but I couldn't tell you why.

02-03-2006, 05:59 PM	#27
kerosene Touring the facilities Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: The plains of Colorado Posts: 3,476	Yet another (finished today): Grace

02-04-2006, 05:48 PM	#28
monster I hear them call the tide Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Perpetual Chaos Posts: 30,852	Moonlight Bather is my favorite. Very "art nouveau" which is a style I am interested in, whereas the others I find more cartoonish/anime which does nothing for me. I find the cerise nipples more "cartoony" than the rest of the bodies, which makes me suspect the artist is scared of them/drawing them. It's like when shy girls wear too much make-up. Not that I know an awful lot about any of it. __________________ The most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity Amelia Earhart

02-06-2006, 03:57 PM	#29
kerosene Touring the facilities Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: The plains of Colorado Posts: 3,476	heh, I haven't thought about that...the nipple comment. I wonder...am I afraid of nipples?

02-07-2006, 02:54 AM	#30
Cyclefrance Pump my ride! Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Deep countryside of Surrey , England Posts: 1,890	You need to go here Case __________________ Always sufficient hills - never sufficient gears

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