Poem Fragments

monster · 08-09-2018, 12:21 PM

"Oh Mama! They're starting the farting!" she cried
"Do let's finish our beans and hurry inside"

Gravdigr · 08-09-2018, 03:13 PM

"Oh, Digr, I'm feeling the reeling!" she sighed,
"I love how you roll' em so fat and so wide!"

Or, is this a private shindig?

monster · 08-09-2018, 03:45 PM

Of course not, this is The Cellar where everything is communal.

Gravdigr · 08-10-2018, 01:30 PM

Good, cuz:

I got rhymes that are bad
And rhymes that are great
Mixed up together
Right here in this crate

Gravdigr · 10-10-2018, 02:52 AM

...and somewhere a neon light flickers to life.

I've had that line in my head for a year or more...

...trying to figure out what to do with it.

lumberjim · 10-10-2018, 10:37 AM

And somewhere a neon light flickers to life.

It's soft hum soothing the day's concern

Gravdigr · 10-10-2018, 03:00 PM

I tried to put it in something about what the neon lights witness in the bars and clubs at night, and whether they feel empathy, or just hang there laughing at us maybe.

I could never get anywhere with it. Couldn't get in the right frame of mind, I guess. I had the melody, at one point...

Gravdigr · 10-10-2018, 03:02 PM

And somewhere, someone turns to the neon light...

I got notebooks full of lines.

Only lines.

And none of them fit together.

DanaC · 10-10-2018, 03:10 PM

Oh I like that idea

I also have loads of single lines and fragments that will probably never go anywhere.

monster · 10-11-2018, 09:27 PM

me three.

I now carry around three mini notebooks -one for pottery inspirations, one for poem fragments/interesting wordish ideas, and one for other craft ideas

08-09-2018, 12:21 PM	#1
monster I hear them call the tide Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Perpetual Chaos Posts: 30,852	Poem Fragments "Oh Mama! They're starting the farting!" she cried "Do let's finish our beans and hurry inside" __________________ The most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity Amelia Earhart

08-09-2018, 03:13 PM	#2
Gravdigr The Un-Tuckian Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: South Central...KY that is Posts: 39,517	"Oh, Digr, I'm feeling the reeling!" she sighed, "I love how you roll' em so fat and so wide!" Or, is this a private shindig? __________________ These statements have not been evaluated by the FDA, EPA, FBI, DEA, CDC, or FDIC. These statements are not intended to diagnose, cause, treat, cure, or prevent any disease. If you feel you have been harmed/offended by, or, disagree with any of the above statements or images, please feel free to fuck right off.

08-09-2018, 03:45 PM	#3
monster I hear them call the tide Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Perpetual Chaos Posts: 30,852	Of course not, this is The Cellar where everything is communal. __________________ The most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity Amelia Earhart

08-10-2018, 01:30 PM	#4
Gravdigr The Un-Tuckian Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: South Central...KY that is Posts: 39,517	Good, cuz: I got rhymes that are bad And rhymes that are great Mixed up together Right here in this crate __________________ These statements have not been evaluated by the FDA, EPA, FBI, DEA, CDC, or FDIC. These statements are not intended to diagnose, cause, treat, cure, or prevent any disease. If you feel you have been harmed/offended by, or, disagree with any of the above statements or images, please feel free to fuck right off.

10-10-2018, 02:52 AM	#5
Gravdigr The Un-Tuckian Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: South Central...KY that is Posts: 39,517	...and somewhere a neon light flickers to life. I've had that line in my head for a year or more... ...trying to figure out what to do with it. __________________ These statements have not been evaluated by the FDA, EPA, FBI, DEA, CDC, or FDIC. These statements are not intended to diagnose, cause, treat, cure, or prevent any disease. If you feel you have been harmed/offended by, or, disagree with any of the above statements or images, please feel free to fuck right off.

10-10-2018, 10:37 AM	#6
lumberjim I can hear my ears Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 25,571	And somewhere a neon light flickers to life. It's soft hum soothing the day's concern __________________ This body holding me reminds me of my own mortality Embrace this moment, remember We are eternal, all this pain is an illusion ~MJKeenan

10-10-2018, 03:00 PM	#7
Gravdigr The Un-Tuckian Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: South Central...KY that is Posts: 39,517	I tried to put it in something about what the neon lights witness in the bars and clubs at night, and whether they feel empathy, or just hang there laughing at us maybe. I could never get anywhere with it. Couldn't get in the right frame of mind, I guess. I had the melody, at one point... __________________ These statements have not been evaluated by the FDA, EPA, FBI, DEA, CDC, or FDIC. These statements are not intended to diagnose, cause, treat, cure, or prevent any disease. If you feel you have been harmed/offended by, or, disagree with any of the above statements or images, please feel free to fuck right off.

10-10-2018, 03:02 PM	#8
Gravdigr The Un-Tuckian Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: South Central...KY that is Posts: 39,517	And somewhere, someone turns to the neon light... I got notebooks full of lines. Only lines. And none of them fit together. __________________ These statements have not been evaluated by the FDA, EPA, FBI, DEA, CDC, or FDIC. These statements are not intended to diagnose, cause, treat, cure, or prevent any disease. If you feel you have been harmed/offended by, or, disagree with any of the above statements or images, please feel free to fuck right off.

10-11-2018, 09:27 PM	#10
monster I hear them call the tide Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Perpetual Chaos Posts: 30,852	me three. I now carry around three mini notebooks -one for pottery inspirations, one for poem fragments/interesting wordish ideas, and one for other craft ideas __________________ The most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity Amelia Earhart

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