B'eating A'round the B'ush

JBKlyde · 03-27-2012, 02:36 PM

Beat'in round the Bush
Beat'in round the Bush
Beat'in round the Bush

Make your lips go shhs
Make your lips go shhs
Make your lips go shhs

I don't have nothing,
Better to do,
That's why I'm picking on you
I'll stop when you go Boohoo

Y-F-T-P

Gravdigr · 03-27-2012, 03:03 PM

What the- I don't even--

DanaC · 03-27-2012, 04:14 PM

From time to time, throwing out an unfinished poem for others to continue it is an interesting little experiment/fun thing to do.

But I really would like to see a poem finished. Because that is where the craft of poetry lies.

Finishing a poem is difficult.

JBKlyde · 03-27-2012, 05:08 PM

If I make it back to school the first thing I will do is take a class in reading and math.. hopefully that will expand my horizons to the point where I'm a better writer...

wolf · 03-27-2012, 05:29 PM

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Originally Posted by DanaC

Finishing a poem is difficult.

Pretty much you just add the words "The End," just to make it clear. It's not like music where you have to do stuff like establish a sub-dominant-dominant-tonic cadence or anything.

DanaC · 03-27-2012, 06:25 PM

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Originally Posted by wolf

Pretty much you just add the words "The End," just to make it clear. It's not like music where you have to do stuff like establish a sub-dominant-dominant-tonic cadence or anything.

You're right it's not like music. But just adding 'the end' does not an ending make.

Personally, I find starting poems very easy. Finishing them can be a bitch.

sexobon · 03-27-2012, 07:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by wolf

Pretty much you just add the words "The End," ...

Quote:

Originally Posted by DanaC

... But just adding 'the end' does not an ending make. ... Finishing them can be a bitch.

The End, Bitch.

JBKlyde · 03-27-2012, 07:38 PM

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your use of apostrophes is most perplexing.

my grammar is rotten as flies on dead fish... i don't know how i got through English one and 2..

ZenGum · 03-27-2012, 05:33 PM

Or you could just write "the nun fainted".

Getgo · 03-27-2012, 05:35 PM

That cheered me up. Thanks.

jimhelm · 03-27-2012, 06:39 PM

some reason this thread title reminds me of cunnilingus

JBKlyde · 03-27-2012, 06:58 PM

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cunnilingus

what's that??

ZenGum · 03-27-2012, 07:02 PM

The application of the lingus (tounge) to the cunare (literally, wedge, signifying the vagina).

Clodfobble · 03-27-2012, 07:09 PM

Learn something new every day. I'll never look at the word "cuneiform" the same way again.

JBKlyde · 03-27-2012, 07:10 PM

not at all what i meant..

it was a recycled thought of the after math of the bush administration war in iraq/b'ab'elon.. yes the sexual sensitivity of sadom was rampit but i'm over it..

03-27-2012, 02:36 PM	#1
JBKlyde Banned Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Encrypted Into an AmpitheaterWall Posts: 1,722	B'eating A'round the B'ush Beat'in round the Bush Beat'in round the Bush Beat'in round the Bush Make your lips go shhs Make your lips go shhs Make your lips go shhs I don't have nothing, Better to do, That's why I'm picking on you I'll stop when you go Boohoo Y-F-T-P

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ZenGum Doctor Wtf Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Badelaide, Baustralia Posts: 12,861	Or you could just write "the nun fainted". __________________ Shut up and hug. MoreThanPretty, Nov 5, 2008. Just because I'm nominally polite, does not make me a pussy. Sundae Girl.

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03-27-2012, 07:02 PM	#13
ZenGum Doctor Wtf Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Badelaide, Baustralia Posts: 12,861	The application of the lingus (tounge) to the cunare (literally, wedge, signifying the vagina). __________________ Shut up and hug. MoreThanPretty, Nov 5, 2008. Just because I'm nominally polite, does not make me a pussy. Sundae Girl.

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JBKlyde Banned Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Encrypted Into an AmpitheaterWall Posts: 1,722	not at all what i meant.. it was a recycled thought of the after math of the bush administration war in iraq/b'ab'elon.. yes the sexual sensitivity of sadom was rampit but i'm over it..

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