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10-08-2012, 03:13 PM
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A Song From My Musical
I'm writing a musical. It's a bit avant-garde, and still a little rough. This is called "Dick's Lament (reprise)" This is after Dick returns from the war only to find that everyone who was an asshole turned out nice, and vice versa. Also, he can't find any strawberry pop-tarts, and 5 dollars comes in cans.
Without further ado: (Dick) Ohhhhhhhhhh... I'm a big fucking dickhead Yeah yeah yeah (chorus) He's a big fucking dickhead yeah yeah yeah (Dick) I got cankers on my shanker And I wave it all around I got snot On my WHAT? And I spread it all around. I got nomads By my gonads But they can't...be...FOUNDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD (chorus) He's a big fucking dickhead Yeah yeah yeah Oh! A big fucking dickhead? Yeah yeah yeah! (Dick) I got diseases Makes me sneezes I say "wah wah wah" I got sassafras up my ass Ain't that hah hah hah? (chorus) He's a big fucking dickhead Yeah yeah yeah Oh! A big fucking dickhead? Didn't I say yeah? (Dick) I got sod in my wad And a stink on my dink (music slows) But I need love toooooooooooo Why can't I get it from you? Why do you do what you dooooooooo? Why you make me boohooo? (chorus) Cause.. You're a big fucking dickhead Yeah yeah yeah But that's OK Anyway Go out and play It Is Your DAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY. (needs a little work, but pretty good, huh?) Last edited by infinite monkey; 10-08-2012 at 03:25 PM. Reason: reason for editing: to edit |
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10-08-2012, 03:28 PM
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Nearly done.
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I'm not a big fan of these romantic things personally.
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10-08-2012, 03:29 PM
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10-08-2012, 06:20 PM
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Doctor Wtf
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Ok, somebody call the nurse. IM needs her meds upped.
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Shut up and hug. MoreThanPretty, Nov 5, 2008. Just because I'm nominally polite, does not make me a pussy. Sundae Girl. |
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10-08-2012, 10:52 PM
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I disagree.
Laughter is the best medicine and she's got a ton of it right here!
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10-08-2012, 11:07 PM
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To shreds, you say?
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Infi, how about a "Who Dunnit?" with a dance number, or a romantic comedy with a plot?
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10-08-2012, 11:46 PM
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Doctor Wtf
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How about a comedy dance number which, after a series of wardrobe failures, develops into a romantic whodunnit?
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Shut up and hug. MoreThanPretty, Nov 5, 2008. Just because I'm nominally polite, does not make me a pussy. Sundae Girl. |
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10-09-2012, 12:42 AM
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very creative..
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10-09-2012, 08:58 AM
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BigV: so true. I think writing that helped my shoulder!
Love all the ideas. As the whims hit me, I'll write more songs. I don't know what possessed me yesterday (the Hair song then the song I posted from Sunday in the Park with George were certainly the inspiration) but I was just messing around. The next one will be more better. Thanks JBK. |
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10-09-2012, 07:40 PM
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Doctor Wtf
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*waits eagerly*
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Shut up and hug. MoreThanPretty, Nov 5, 2008. Just because I'm nominally polite, does not make me a pussy. Sundae Girl. |
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10-10-2012, 09:36 AM
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More! More! More!
Get the fertilizer 'out' and onto the page.
Best therapy in the friggin' world (also: you're an exceptional writer). |
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10-10-2012, 02:53 PM
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Quote:
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In Barrie's play and novel, the roles of fairies are brief: they are allies to the Lost Boys, the source of fairy dust and ...They are portrayed as dangerous, whimsical and extremely clever but quite hedonistic. "Shall I give you a kiss?" Peter asked and, jerking an acorn button off his coat, solemnly presented it to her. —James Barrie Wimminfolk they be tricksy. - ZenGum |
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10-10-2012, 09:38 AM
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 Thanks. I'm thinking of new ones. Maybe I'll spend more than 5 minutes on the next one. 
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