|
|
|||||||
| Arts & Entertainment Give meaning to your life or distract you from it for a while |
|
|
Thread Tools | Display Modes |
07-25-2008, 09:01 AM
|
#5 |
|
Glutton for Gluttony
Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Tampa, FL
Posts: 1,409
|
Without the original text, it's hard to proofread because I'm not sure what meaning you are trying to convey.
Two things that stood out to me are "matt paintings," which I think should be "matte paintings," and "Frazetta has become a living totem..." If Frazetta is someone that his colleagues look up to, I think another word like "idol" might work better instead of "totem." |
|
|
| Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests) | |
|
|
Threaded Mode