Hooked on fantasy art?

Chocolatl · 07-25-2008, 09:01 AM

Without the original text, it's hard to proofread because I'm not sure what meaning you are trying to convey.
Two things that stood out to me are "matt paintings," which I think should be "matte paintings," and "Frazetta has become a living totem..." If Frazetta is someone that his colleagues look up to, I think another word like "idol" might work better instead of "totem."

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07-25-2008, 09:01 AM	#5
Chocolatl Glutton for Gluttony Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Tampa, FL Posts: 1,409	Without the original text, it's hard to proofread because I'm not sure what meaning you are trying to convey. Two things that stood out to me are "matt paintings," which I think should be "matte paintings," and "Frazetta has become a living totem..." If Frazetta is someone that his colleagues look up to, I think another word like "idol" might work better instead of "totem."

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