A poem... - Page 5

mrnoodle · 05-31-2005, 02:07 PM

he was deliberately crawling up my ass and setting off roman candles. Like a schmuck, I heartily ate the troll bait and imploded. I see now that by ignoring him, I'm depriving myself of fuel for my righteous indignation, and he has one less person to feel superior to. I'm still not going to take being insulted, but have decided to sink to his level instead of ignoring him like a boring "adult". Far more engaging that way.

He still thinks I'm a clueless fucktard and I still think he traded his soul for a soiled paperback copy of Das Kapital he found in a dumpster behind a coffeehouse.

Lady Sidhe · 05-31-2005, 03:46 PM

Sun_Sparkz: Thanks for the critique. I'll have to read over it again. And as to the last paragraph of your comments, I noticed the same thing. I don't know the whys, and I don't suppose there's really a point in trying to find out. *shrug*

Sycamore: Is that the best you can do? Take your ball and go home. The olive branch wasn't extended to you. You're hopeless as far as friendship material is concerned. I see no reason to be pleasant to you, because you're simply an unpleasant person. I'm looking for someone with a more open mind and a more extended vocabulary.

MrNoodle: Yup, it's the first post...

Sidhe

elSicomoro · 05-31-2005, 04:05 PM

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Originally Posted by Lady Sidhe

Sycamore: Is that the best you can do? Take your ball and go home. The olive branch wasn't extended to you. You're hopeless as far as friendship material is concerned. I see no reason to be pleasant to you, because you're simply an unpleasant person. I'm looking for someone with a more open mind and a more extended vocabulary.

Oh, I'm so hurt! Boo hoo hoo! Sidhe doesn't want to be friends with me! Oh, what will I ever do?! Oh, this is so horrible! Oh my God! Waaaaaaaaah!

Posted by Sidhe 5/28/05: If anyone feels I've attacked them personally, I apologize. I won't apologize for being opinionated, because everyone here is, or we wouldn't be here.

Lady Sidhe · 05-31-2005, 04:59 PM

It wasn't intended as an insult, sycamore, although I know that's the track your mind is on. It was just a statement of fact. *shrug*

wolf · 06-01-2005, 12:27 AM

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Originally Posted by mrnoodle

he traded his soul for a soiled paperback copy of Das Kapital he found in a dumpster behind a coffeehouse.

Shame that's too long for a user title. Maybe he could use it as a sig?

elSicomoro · 05-31-2005, 09:11 PM

Ooooookay...

elSicomoro · 06-01-2005, 10:23 PM

It's good to see that you're still as stupid as usual. And predictable. And useless.

Strike three!

wolf · 06-02-2005, 12:42 AM

Would everybody please just put it back in yer pants?

Truce.

elSicomoro · 06-02-2005, 08:12 AM

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Originally Posted by wolf

Would everybody please just put it back in yer pants?

Truce.

Wolf, dear, I think you know that the chances of Jim and I agreeing to a truce are about as likely as you selling all your guns and going to work for moveon.org.

Let that stupid nigger keep talking...I could use some more laughs.

cowhead · 06-02-2005, 03:30 AM

no shit.. speaking as low cow on the pecking order of things, and have long been reading about how nasty things can get around here.. wow.. I thought the local boards were bad. anyway! the poem!

I'm not a big fan of that rhyme scheme.. (then again mine is to try to rhyme every third line.. I don't know why, but it's that way) but you managed to work it out in an almost dylanesque style in parts, which I really like.

kinda dark, and hopeless.. then again it is meant to be an expression of emotional turmoil. so my main question is.. did you feel better once you wrote it? (and other than this bru-ha-ha that erupted around it) did it ease some of the pain or only make that moment freeze in time? (to be re-lived over and over? )

Lady Sidhe · 06-02-2005, 01:15 PM

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Originally Posted by cowhead

no shit.. speaking as low cow on the pecking order of things, and have long been reading about how nasty things can get around here.. wow.. I thought the local boards were bad. anyway! the poem!

I'm not a big fan of that rhyme scheme.. (then again mine is to try to rhyme every third line.. I don't know why, but it's that way) but you managed to work it out in an almost dylanesque style in parts, which I really like.

kinda dark, and hopeless.. then again it is meant to be an expression of emotional turmoil. so my main question is.. did you feel better once you wrote it? (and other than this bru-ha-ha that erupted around it) did it ease some of the pain or only make that moment freeze in time? (to be re-lived over and over? )

Interesting--I don't think I've ever been described as writing in a "dylan-esque" fashion. I'll take it as a compliment.

Did I feel better? I don't really know. Kind of...It got it out of my system for a while, made it stop running round and round in my head, and didn't take as long as writing in a diary, with all the little details, would have. I'm more of a feeling-type person, which, I guess is why I can write poetry and not stories.

I don't really re-live it over and over, no. It was just that, at the time, I had to get it out somehow, and writing poetry is how I do that. I only write when I'm depressed....maybe it's that early Poe influence *grin*

I've tried several types of writing. It all depends on what rhymes well, and how, I guess. I went through a prose-poetry spell once...some of my favorites are from that time. But like Frost said, "poetry without rhyme is like tennis without a net." I think it was Frost, anyway. The whole idea of it being harder to create a good, flowing rhyme than to just write, appealed to me at that point. So I laid aside my "gotta be different" tendency and started rhyming more.

Thanks for the critique!

Sidhe

mrnoodle · 06-02-2005, 01:01 PM

Invocation of "nigger" usually signals end-of-thread, but in this case provided suitable counterpoint to limp-wristed "working at Subway" line. I'm having a hard time calling this one. Have to see whether or not Syc is biding his time and waiting for a clear shot, or if LJ's impressive fusillade has sunk the USS Whale Penis.

WHO WILL WIN?????????????????

elSicomoro · 06-02-2005, 01:22 PM

Noodle, as far I'm concerned, it ended the minute he attacked my physical appearance. He's done it twice before...like I said, he's predictable.

Jim doesn't get to me...hell, none of you folks really get to me. I only went after Sidhe because I find her to be annoying and because she opened her mouth when she probably shouldn't have. Same with UT, except change the pronouns. My history here will clearly show that I only go after people when I am attacked or when it is truly warranted (of course, people's opinions will vary on that one). But it's not like you folks really make me angry...the idiots make me laugh more than anything, but they can be annoying and take away from the place. There aren't many of them, though, so it's all good. And there are some people whose thoughts and opinions I truly admire and respect. Hence why I'm still here after 4 years.

Jim mentioned "bitterness" and TS mentioned "animosity" earlier in this thread...seriously, you guys think that I'm better and animous? Seriously? Believe me...not even close. In the past, shit here definitely bothered me...not anymore. Wolf can probably back me up on this...we chatted about this thread the other night on the phone. I have far more important things to worry about than a handful of people on a bulletin board that are afflicted with "net courage."

Lady Sidhe · 06-02-2005, 01:25 PM

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Originally Posted by mrnoodle

Invocation of "nigger" usually signals end-of-thread, but in this case provided suitable counterpoint to limp-wristed "working at Subway" line. I'm having a hard time calling this one. Have to see whether or not Syc is biding his time and waiting for a clear shot, or if LJ's impressive fusillade has sunk the USS Whale Penis.

WHO WILL WIN?????????????????

Invocation of "nigger" usually signals that the person using the word is at the end of his intellectual tether. I'm surprised it took him this long. He must be reading the dictionary...

And my money's on LJ, mainly because he knows sycamore, but also because I've been to his site, and also because sycamore has done nothing except curse people out, insult people, and has yet to give a decent reason as to why he's being such an ass in the first place. Absolutely no reason for his behavior at all. I made a joke in the very beginning, in an attempt to show that I wasn't trying to take it all too too seriously, and apparantly he took it as an invitation to make insulting comments about someone he doesn't even know. Anyone who disagreed with him became fair game for his insults, and BAM! Here we are.

Gotta love the Cellar, where people are so comfortable with each other. Maybe we should start selling tickets and taking bets....

This could end up being the biggest thing on the net. And I thought this place couldn't get any better....silly me!

Place yer bets! Place yer bets!

Sidhe

elSicomoro · 06-02-2005, 01:49 PM

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Originally Posted by Lady Sidhe

Invocation of "nigger" usually signals that the person using the word is at the end of his intellectual tether. I'm surprised it took him this long. He must be reading the dictionary...

Still running your mouth, eh? I only use the term "nigger" on people that, in my opinion, deserved to be referred to as such. To my knowledge, I have only used it on Radar and Lumberjim in a serious manner here.

See, I wouldn't call you a nigger..."stupid cunt" works better for you.

Quote:

And my money's on LJ, mainly because he knows sycamore, but also because I've been to his site, and also because sycamore has done nothing except curse people out, insult people, and has yet to give a decent reason as to why he's being such an ass in the first place.

Based on Jim's last post in this thread, it's clear to me that he doesn't know me.

You've been given a reason...twice now. You probably just didn't like it.

Quote:

I made a joke in the very beginning, in an attempt to show that I wasn't trying to take it all too too seriously, and apparantly he took it as an invitation to make insulting comments about someone he doesn't even know. Anyone who disagreed with him became fair game for his insults, and BAM! Here we are.

Based on the tone in your original post (which you have edited since originally posting it), you sounded quite serious. Plus, I do find you to be annoying in general. *shrugs* Now, maybe I should have asked about your second post in the thread. And if you were indeed joking, then I sincerely apologize. Really. See...I'm not such an asshole. But I suspect that you actually were miffed that I asked about TS, and didn't say anything about your poem.

I don't think any of us really know each other that well in the end. But based on your history here and your website, I think I know you well enough to know that you ARE a drama queen, and that you DO have a hard time taking back what is dished out at you. And you HAVE disrespected your husband on this board.

I only gave back what was dished out to me. You opened your mouth first...so did Jim, so did UT, so did Buster. Sure, I could have just let it roll off me, but I thought it better to go after the people. And maybe that's my bad...Lord knows that I'm not perfect. But as I said in a previous post, I only go after people when warranted or when attacked first. 4 years and almost 9000 posts won't lie.

05-31-2005, 02:07 PM	#1
mrnoodle bent Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: under the weather Posts: 2,656	he was deliberately crawling up my ass and setting off roman candles. Like a schmuck, I heartily ate the troll bait and imploded. I see now that by ignoring him, I'm depriving myself of fuel for my righteous indignation, and he has one less person to feel superior to. I'm still not going to take being insulted, but have decided to sink to his level instead of ignoring him like a boring "adult". Far more engaging that way. He still thinks I'm a clueless fucktard and I still think he traded his soul for a soiled paperback copy of Das Kapital he found in a dumpster behind a coffeehouse. __________________ Sìn a nall na cuaranan sin. -- Cha mhór is fheairrde thu iad, tha iad coltach ri cat air a dhathadh

05-31-2005, 03:46 PM	#2
Lady Sidhe That's my story and I'm stickin' to it.... Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Hammond, La. Posts: 978	Sun_Sparkz: Thanks for the critique. I'll have to read over it again. And as to the last paragraph of your comments, I noticed the same thing. I don't know the whys, and I don't suppose there's really a point in trying to find out. shrug Sycamore: Is that the best you can do? Take your ball and go home. The olive branch wasn't extended to you. You're hopeless as far as friendship material is concerned. I see no reason to be pleasant to you, because you're simply an unpleasant person. I'm looking for someone with a more open mind and a more extended vocabulary. MrNoodle: Yup, it's the first post... Sidhe __________________ My free will...I never leave home without it. --House Someday I want to be rich. Some people get so rich they lose all respect for humanity. That's how rich I want to be. -Rita Rudner

05-31-2005, 04:59 PM	#4
Lady Sidhe That's my story and I'm stickin' to it.... Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Hammond, La. Posts: 978	It wasn't intended as an insult, sycamore, although I know that's the track your mind is on. It was just a statement of fact. shrug __________________ My free will...I never leave home without it. --House Someday I want to be rich. Some people get so rich they lose all respect for humanity. That's how rich I want to be. -Rita Rudner

06-02-2005, 12:42 AM	#8
wolf lobber of scimitars Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Phila Burbs Posts: 20,774	Would everybody please just put it back in yer pants? Truce. __________________ wolf eht htiw og "Conspiracies are the norm, not the exception." --G. Edward Griffin The Creature from Jekyll Island High Priestess of the Church of the Whale Penis

06-02-2005, 03:30 AM	#10
cowhead halve your cake and eat it too. Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Georgia.. by way of Lawrence Kansas Posts: 1,359	no shit.. speaking as low cow on the pecking order of things, and have long been reading about how nasty things can get around here.. wow.. I thought the local boards were bad. anyway! the poem! I'm not a big fan of that rhyme scheme.. (then again mine is to try to rhyme every third line.. I don't know why, but it's that way) but you managed to work it out in an almost dylanesque style in parts, which I really like. kinda dark, and hopeless.. then again it is meant to be an expression of emotional turmoil. so my main question is.. did you feel better once you wrote it? (and other than this bru-ha-ha that erupted around it) did it ease some of the pain or only make that moment freeze in time? (to be re-lived over and over? ) __________________ no my child.. this is not my desire..I'm digging for fire.

05-31-2005, 09:11 PM	#6
elSicomoro Person who doesn't update the user title Join Date: Jan 2001 Posts: 12,486	Ooooookay...

06-01-2005, 10:23 PM	#7
elSicomoro Person who doesn't update the user title Join Date: Jan 2001 Posts: 12,486	It's good to see that you're still as stupid as usual. And predictable. And useless. Strike three!

06-02-2005, 01:01 PM	#12
mrnoodle bent Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: under the weather Posts: 2,656	Invocation of "nigger" usually signals end-of-thread, but in this case provided suitable counterpoint to limp-wristed "working at Subway" line. I'm having a hard time calling this one. Have to see whether or not Syc is biding his time and waiting for a clear shot, or if LJ's impressive fusillade has sunk the USS Whale Penis. WHO WILL WIN????????????????? __________________ Sìn a nall na cuaranan sin. -- Cha mhór is fheairrde thu iad, tha iad coltach ri cat air a dhathadh

06-02-2005, 01:22 PM	#13
elSicomoro Person who doesn't update the user title Join Date: Jan 2001 Posts: 12,486	Noodle, as far I'm concerned, it ended the minute he attacked my physical appearance. He's done it twice before...like I said, he's predictable. Jim doesn't get to me...hell, none of you folks really get to me. I only went after Sidhe because I find her to be annoying and because she opened her mouth when she probably shouldn't have. Same with UT, except change the pronouns. My history here will clearly show that I only go after people when I am attacked or when it is truly warranted (of course, people's opinions will vary on that one). But it's not like you folks really make me angry...the idiots make me laugh more than anything, but they can be annoying and take away from the place. There aren't many of them, though, so it's all good. And there are some people whose thoughts and opinions I truly admire and respect. Hence why I'm still here after 4 years. Jim mentioned "bitterness" and TS mentioned "animosity" earlier in this thread...seriously, you guys think that I'm better and animous? Seriously? Believe me...not even close. In the past, shit here definitely bothered me...not anymore. Wolf can probably back me up on this...we chatted about this thread the other night on the phone. I have far more important things to worry about than a handful of people on a bulletin board that are afflicted with "net courage."

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