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We have to go back, Kate!
Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: Yorkshire
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I actually rather liked the story. I liked the style of writing. I wasn't entirely sure about the ending, seemed to lack a certain something, but overall I thought it worked.
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The future is unwritten
Join Date: Oct 2002
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There was a link to the rest of the story in the first post, if anyone was interested. There is also 14 other web sites it's on.
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#18 |
Touring the facilities
Join Date: Nov 2002
Location: The plains of Colorado
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I must have been different 2 years ago. I don't even understand my own response from 2005.
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I hear them call the tide
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Perpetual Chaos
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And I didn't say you were.
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