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04-18-2009, 08:32 AM
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We have to go back, Kate!
Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: Yorkshire
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I've decided this is one of those that works better read aloud. I've been reading it out, playing with inflection and intonation. I am inclined to leave it broadly as is. I think I need to play with the punctuation a little though. There are a couple of pauses in the rhythm that I'd like to remove and one or two I'd like to add.
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