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05-29-2017, 02:14 PM
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We have to go back, Kate!
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The Monkey's Tale
My brother took himself on a creative journey recently - though the focus of that creativity was something else, an offshoot was a sudden discovery of his poetic muse. In a few days he wrote a number of poems, verse experiments and haiku
I like all of them, but there are a few that I really liked,and asked if it would be ok to post here  This is one of them. The Monkey’s Tale Monkey cry monkey call Monkey try monkey fall Monkey take monkey’s hand Monkey help monkey stand Monkey see monkey do Monkey know monkey true Monkey climb monkey tree Monkey swing monkey free Monkey hide monkey spy Monkey leap monkey fly Monkey play monkey rest Monkey beat monkey chest Monkey hunt monkey thrill Monkey chase monkey kill Monkey yearn monkey know Monkey learn monkey grow Monkey feel monkey rue Monkey love monkey two Monkey good monkey bad Monkey happy monkey sad Monkey laugh monkey cry Monkey live monkey die. by MC
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05-29-2017, 02:31 PM
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That is *excellent*!
Please pass on my thanks for sharing this gem.
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05-29-2017, 02:33 PM
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We have to go back, Kate!
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Will do V.
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05-29-2017, 02:39 PM
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Love it.
Monkey, I mean. I love monkey. The poem is awesome, too. Rly.
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05-29-2017, 03:49 PM
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I can hear my ears
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It's a song
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05-29-2017, 05:38 PM
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The future is unwritten
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Yeah, could be.
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05-30-2017, 06:53 AM
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still says videotape
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That right there, is the good shit.
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05-30-2017, 07:02 AM
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Person who doesn't update the user title
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Monkey Good!!!
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05-30-2017, 02:49 PM
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We have to go back, Kate!
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I shall pass along your appreciative comments
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