My Poetry

Odd_Bloke · 05-29-2003, 08:24 PM

I'm bored, so I thought I'd subject y'all to some of my poetry. Please tell me what you think of it etc. and feel free to rip it to shreds. Remember, you are probably on the other side of the pond to me.

I Think

I know how I feel.
This life is not unreal.
I know myself,
Without a doubt.
I think.

My love for you is true,
I'll never love another.
I could never,
With my undying love for you.
I think.

You make me feel giddy,
Happy and spinning,
I love to be around you,
And hate to be separate.
I think.

But this worrying is pointless.
I know you.
I know myself.
I know me.
I think.

I think,
And yet thoughts don't come.
I'm confused.
I don't know what I know.

I think.

05-29-2003, 08:24 PM	#1
Odd_Bloke Resident Denizen Join Date: May 2003 Location: Peterborough, UK Posts: 60	My Poetry I'm bored, so I thought I'd subject y'all to some of my poetry. Please tell me what you think of it etc. and feel free to rip it to shreds. Remember, you are probably on the other side of the pond to me. I Think I know how I feel. This life is not unreal. I know myself, Without a doubt. I think. My love for you is true, I'll never love another. I could never, With my undying love for you. I think. You make me feel giddy, Happy and spinning, I love to be around you, And hate to be separate. I think. But this worrying is pointless. I know you. I know myself. I know me. I think. I think, And yet thoughts don't come. I'm confused. I don't know what I know. I think. __________________ "I am after all," said Pooh, "a bear of little brain." - A.A. Milne

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